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Whispers and Walls: Love, Loss, and Laughter (Hour 3)
Nite Lite with Pete Schwaba and Greg Bach · Tue Dec 2, 2025
included like Super Mario lands Like this dark universe where there was like a Frankenstein thing and then how to train your dragon and a little bit of hair like Harry Potter universe is the fantastic beast if you ever you know what that is That's where it's set where they have it.
Oh, okay
It was, yeah, it was pretty cool.
Got to go on some rides.
Very nice.
If you missed the show, it is available in podcast form at civicmedia.us.
We've had a lot of fun tonight.
Jim Knipfel was here.
He is an author whose book
It was turned into a movie and you can catch it at the Tarleton this weekend at seven o'clock on Saturday night.
It was called Newgie's Time to Shine.
Love the title.
And then Mike Siegel was here.
Mike is a friend of mine and a TV host and he was also in The Godfather of Green Bay and made a great behind the scenes video that you can see on YouTube.
If you just go to YouTube and type in Godfather of Green Bay behind the scenes, you can see Tony Goldman, Lauren Holly.
And the whole cast talking about their experience up in Marinette, Wisconsin.
The movie is playing tomorrow, I'm sorry, Thursday night, December 4th at the Atwood Music Hall.
It's the 20th anniversary of the Godfather of Green Bay.
And we will be giving tickets away.
I think we'll do that tomorrow night.
We'll give some tickets away.
But hopefully you guys can make it out there.
And if you do, please say hello.
We have a great cast.
Kurt Newman wrote a great score.
Kurt is the founder of the band the Bodines gave us a lot of great Bodine's music in the film and it's kind of a feel-good movie and Some good laughs and a good movie to see with a crowd part of the proceeds go to the Dane County Humane Society too, so it's for a good cause and laughter and to help animals so one could be better
Than that so that is December 4th.
I'll be there Conrad's gonna be there doing some behind-the-scenes stuff and talking to people so it should be a really fun night
So come on out.
This is Giving Tuesday, folks.
I think you probably are already aware of that if you've been listening to the show.
And if not, I'll just tell you, this is a great national kind of a national holiday where people give and they find nonprofits and are encouraged to give and help those in need.
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right?
So it's this.
the station site slash give and click on the Giving Tuesday banner to help your local nonprofits in your area.
Your kindness is greatly appreciated.
And as I said, you can make someone very happy, especially during the holidays.
It's cold outside, and there's a great list of nonprofits that you can help and donate to.
And if you're in Madison, some of the affiliates we have here at Nightlight are Madison, Wausau, Waukesha, Wisconsin Rapids, Richland Center, Oshkosh Green Bay, Hayward, La Crosse, and Eau Claire.
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All right, here's the Civic Media question of the night.
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It is Travel Tuesday here in America.
It's a national, well, it's a national website day.
But our question of the night is, what is the crappiest state or city you've been to?
I said North Dakota and Winnipeg.
I know Winnipeg's not in America, but I guess I never really specified that it had to be in the U.S.
Conrad said Athens, Greece, and the state of Illinois.
Very mature.
Well, no, it's because of the traffic, you know?
Yeah.
But when you say Illinois, like Chicago has traffic, the rest of Illinois, you could be
He is a local Northeast Wisconsin based author.
He will be in studio.
We've had two authors on tonight.
That's fun.
Brett is a very prolific writer and he will be along shortly to join me here in the studio.
But answer our question tonight.
Love to know what you guys are thinking.
What is the crappiest state or city you've been to?
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But there are some nice cities.
I did stand up in Indianapolis many times.
And in a weird way, I really like Gary, Indiana.
It's gritty.
It's deserted.
It lost half its population.
But when that happens, like it happened with Detroit, I think there's a great opportunity for rebirth.
I think that's going to happen for some of those like Hammond, Gary.
I mean, they are on the lake, and everybody's coming to the Great Lakes Conrad.
That would be cool, wouldn't it?
That would be cool.
I had a perfect, like, I kind of thought of you because I know you hate winter.
I realized I was trying to get down here because we had some recording to do, and I left a little early and I get to my car.
and it's got snow on it, like an inch and a half of snow.
It somehow snowed last night.
I shoveled the whole driveway the night before.
I didn't even know it snowed last night.
I had more snow on my car.
I opened the door, snow goes in the car.
I gotta wipe that off.
Oh no.
And then while I'm looking for my snow scraper, I bump my head and snow goes down my collar.
And I'm about ready to take hostages.
I'm just like, I hate winter, what am I doing?
And it was awful, but it's like one of those things, it's like a...
for lack of a better term, snowball effect.
Waffle.
It's just a constant reminder of winter.
But we choose to live here.
Yeah, we do.
I mean, it's a rough... I realized yesterday, because it was December 1st, I'm like, this is the last fun month.
You know, New Year's is fun, and then it's just kind of downhill.
Like, the year is a great buildup, and then it crescendos, like, at Christmas, and then we go down, and until May, I don't really find any joy, at least in the weather,
All right, let's get through some texts here.
Our question of the night is, what is the crappiest state or city you've been to?
And this is in honor of Travel Tuesday, which is a thing, folks.
Melissa in Madison and then a 608 says Indiana.
I think that's like six for Indiana.
For Indiana, I know.
Monica from Mount Horrib also in the 608 says, went to Roswell, New Mexico this spring.
Interesting.
She says, there was a lot of hype, but there was only one UFO museum and then some other lame UFO experience thing.
I have enjoyed something about every state I've been to.
Also went to North Dakota for the first time this year and wasn't aware.
There were many, there were that many shades of green.
Pierce, South Dakota is a little underwhelming as a capital city.
Monica's just got a whole laundry list of bad cities and states.
Thank you, Monica.
Thank you, Melissa.
Pardon me.
Tyler from Wisconsin Rapids in the 608.
Well, his phone was in the 608 says, Winslow, Arizona.
We four long hair hippies stopped on a speed trap, car search, pay big fine and escort out of town.
I think he's missing some articles in that sentence, Tyler, but he says, did not see the girl my lord in a flatbed Ford.
I love that tune.
That's the Eagles.
You know that song, Conn?
I know like a couple songs from the Eagles.
It's a girl, my lord, in a flatbed fort, slowing down to take a look at me.
Well, I didn't sing it very well either.
Ed in Madison in the 608 says, Indiana, I refuse to stop
When forced to go through it, I arrange all my stops to be in a bordering state.
They should bulldoze it and try again.
Wow.
That is harsh.
Ross from Crawford County says, I've been to just about every state in the union and I can't find one that I would say I don't like.
Oh, look at that.
Ross, nice.
Every state has horrible traffic.
The cities that I don't like are ones that are difficult to walk around in.
If there's really nothing to do in those cities, so no cultural places to visit, no decent breweries.
Cities that have, cities that
Have say a river or a stream or a lake don't take advantage of that with a nice walkway alongside it are disappointing.
Janesville, which is kind of a nice city, but I don't think they take advantage of the Rock River.
Most of the restaurants and such are a block or so away and miss the view.
You know, I'm with Ross there.
It annoys me when people don't make the most of their lakefront.
I don't think we've done that in Marinette.
And I mean, it goes back decades.
Somebody.
kind of drop the ball along the way, you know.
But I totally get what Ross is saying.
Thank you, Ross.
All right, we will get to your text as well, Bridget and others that just came in.
We're gonna do a very short break and come back with author Brett Kissinger.
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Maybe we can indulge him in some Packer Bear talk.
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Right now, it is my pleasure to introduce my next guest.
He is a very prolific writer and author from right here in Northeast Wisconsin.
He is no stranger to Nightlight.
He's been here before and he always comes into the studio and I love that.
Mr. Brett Kissinger, hey buddy, how are
you?
Good, how
400.
Do you bench?
I do.
I don't go for Max anymore though, so.
That's a guy trying to be, you can hump it, Greg, here, Greg.
Let me put it, can you put, you think you can put three bills up?
Yeah.
Holy smokes.
The self-destructive side of me wants to say something insulting just to see what he would do, because he's got, look at this guy, he's a mountain of muscle.
And you're not a football fan, typically.
Not typically, no.
No thoughts.
I'm not a
hacker fan, but I mean, not invested to the.
point of other people are.
I'm totally kidding.
I don't even know if that's a thing.
Blasting quads?
Or your pecs, whatever.
All right, enough joking.
It is great to have you.
You're a serious author.
I'm trying to be funny with you.
And you write these great books about pretty heavy topics.
Yeah, definitely.
So we're going to get into that.
We do have to do a break.
So why don't we hold our book talk until after the news and then we will jump into your new.
Well, give us some background, if you would, on your new book.
This is sort of a Romeo and Juliet story.
Sort of,
yeah.
So it kind of came about researching my last novel in the terms of
just the way the Holocaust didn't end in 1945 for the Jews.
The World War II really didn't end for the German people in May of 1945.
After it was torn apart, became two zones or four zones, which later became West and East Germany.
And kind of the idea was, you know, reading about the history and all these families and friends that were just torn apart when this wall came up and separated for decades.
And I just thought that was a really good story and to kind of put like you say like a Romeo and Juliet type situation where, you know, every relationship has a wall that could be put up and this one happens to be a literal wall
kind of insurmountable.
And I'm sure what happened in your book happened.
People were separated by that wall, kind of like the Civil War, where you had brother fighting against brother, as the saying goes.
This book is called Whispers Through the Wall, great title, by the way.
Where did you come up with the title?
I took a long time to kind of think of what I wanted.
It was the working title of the wall.
And I knew I'm like, I need some a little punchier than that.
And just the idea of this relationship really
A whisper is kind of like a soft thing and like this relationship was also just holding on by a thread or a whisper or a feather type of thing in the wall, obviously in reference to the Berlin Wall.
We've got about a minute to go until the break.
Where do you, what makes you want to write about something so geographically?
distance, so to speak.
I mean, it's a great story.
Everybody knows about East West Germany, but to dig into this, and I'll ask you after the break about your research and all that, but what made you want to write this?
I think it's a, you know, we know a little bit about East and West Germany, but I really think, especially in American schools, if you look at the 1960s, you know, you're ending the Korean War, you've got the Kennedy assassination, and then you've got Vietnam, and the whole East West Berlin kind of becomes a footnote in American schools, I feel like.
It was a very counterpig area where one shot could start World War III and that really, the entire eyes of the world were on Berlin at that time.
All right, we're gonna get more into Brett's new book.
Whispers through the wall, love the title.
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We've got some texts here.
Our question tonight is what is the crappiest state or city you've been to because it's Travel Tuesday.
And John Murray, our pal from the 608 says, evening, Peter and Conrad lived in Chicago for four years and worked in the Hancock building way back in the late 80s.
Cool.
I was a little intimidated, but never uncomfortable everywhere I went in the Windy City.
None of my experience there prepared me for a Gary Indiana gas station.
It was like a nightmare.
Burned out cars on the street in front, two dudes punching each other like Rocky next to the bathroom door.
It looked like an active war zone, just a bulletproof drawer to put the money.
into pay.
No entry.
Cardoors locked till back in Illinois.
Yikes.
I said Gary was like one of my favorite cities for that reason, for the grit.
I don't want to get caught there.
I'm just saying.
I think there's a lot of potential there.
Thank you, John.
Steady Eddie says Pete and Conrad, North Dakota.
Another vote for North Dakota.
Like maybe four?
I think that's the second in the running.
No, I
Steady Eddie continues golfer Ken Green, a five time winner on the PGA tour, once saved his dog named Nip from the attack of a 10 and a half foot gator in Florida.
This is to our conversation earlier about Conrad's vacation.
He says the dog had jumped into a canal to retrieve a rubber ball and the alligator attacked.
Green said I wasn't going to watch my dog go like that.
He jumped into the canal, wrestled the gator and got the dog to safety.
The dog needed stitches and Green was unable to play golf for a month.
This is a terrible story.
Green also lost a leg in an auto accident, but was able to return to play professional golf.
I saw him play in the Madison area on the PGA Champions Tour several years ago.
I, steadfast Edward, many years ago, once bravely faced a large, fierce-looking snapping turtle on the green of a local golf course.
The giant turtle was in my putting line.
Pete, that's a big no-no in golf.
Ask Conrad.
What was I to do?
It was me against him, man against beast, immobile.
Um, immovable object versus irresistible force.
After some contemplation, I decided to cautiously put around the giant menacing prehistoric reptile.
I still have all my fingers and live to tell the tale.
I hope that big old turtle is still alive, swimming free, no harm, no foul.
Very forgiving.
Sometimes discretion is the better part of valor.
Be kind to your friends in the swamp.
Steady eddy.
NPS.
Conrad, there's a post script.
Conrad, congrats on the two-year anniversary of Nightlight.
Thank you, Steady Eddie.
One of our favorite textures.
Much appreciated and great to hear from you.
All right, my guest in the studio here is author Brett Kissinger.
He is from Algoma, Wisconsin, made the drive to the Nightlight Studios tonight.
It's good to see you again, buddy.
Good to see you.
So did you answer the question of the night?
You have a state or city you don't like?
No.
North Dakota seems like an attack on a very passive people.
Do you think they're
I don't know.
Kind
Vegas, I guess.
kind of like it's not for everybody and definitely
families.
But North Dakota, I want to clarify that people are very nice.
It's just not a lot to look at.
They don't have our trees or it's kind of bleak.
Especially in the winter.
All right, so Las Vegas, what about a state?
Have you been to a state you thought was crappy?
No, I don't think so.
You're too positive, Brett.
All right, let's get into Brett's book.
He is an author.
His new book is called Whispers Through the Wall.
We've talked about many of your books on this show before.
Give us a little background on the story, Brett, and then let's tell people where they can find it.
Sure.
So yeah, we talked about the Romeo and Juliet aspect of the novel and in researching it, just kind of, it was capitalism, capitalism versus communism in the same city.
And that's never happened before where he had, you know, the American-backed capitalism, the Soviet-backed communism, and it was kind of like two Queens on a chessboard, you know, meeting head on.
And in researching,
The just the drastic differences in the life of a West Berlin or versus an East Berlin or just in the terms of smog and pollution and the the types of automobiles and the music and you know the the clothing and The Stasi were kind of the infamous secret police where they had an unlimited network of informants that were ratting out your neighbors and your friends and your family and
Basically an unofficial number is one in six East Germans were part of the Stasi machine and reporting on people and just the fear that they instilled and That really kind of informed the novel of Wolfgang who's the the main character from East Berlin and just how much terror they could instill and like who can you trust and After the wall went down they had to come to grips with the fact that your brother your
your mother, your sister had informed on you to the Stasi, and the betrayal that these people felt is kind of unfathomable.
I'm definitely a history buff.
You
to put a lot in.
And I'm definitely like pretty meticulous.
And like, if I write about a full moon, like I'm going to research and see like, okay, on that day and in that year, was that actually a full moon?
Because I'm very like,
Picky about that sort of thing where I want it to be incredibly factual.
I don't want to Change facts to meet my story like I always kind of say that The facts are the brick and my story is like the the mortar
be malleable But like I'm not gonna change the facts.
So like I make sure that works.
So yeah, I definitely try to read as much as I can podcasts Documentaries anything I can watch even movies like
I won't necessarily take the facts, but I can look at clothing and just kind of like the automobiles and kind of get an understanding of what things
like.
They can find it on Amazon.
if they just look up my name.
The Kindle version is, or the e-book is available for pre-order, and then the paperback and hardcover are available on Friday the 5th.
I'm kind of old school.
I have gone Kindle a lot recently because I buy a lot of books, and it's like, I have my own library, but there's something about turning a page that just is...
I
Yeah, I'll read basically anything.
I do like to work nonfiction.
I just read a book on Lewis and Clark.
very long, very detailed, like I knew what they had for lunch on a certain
little more in-depth than
un-lunchable, move on.
Yeah, yeah, yeah.
But yeah, I do like reading that in fiction because you never know what little tidbit of history is gonna spark something, so.
Wall?
It really, so in my last book, The Surviving Remnant, there's a scene that takes place in Berlin in 1964.
So I did some research of like, all right, I knew that the wall was up at that point and just kind of researching this little throwaway, not a throwaway scene, but some narration.
Like I came across and I was like, ooh, that's really poised for drama.
It's just between the two superpowers and then on a granular level between.
just separated people and I read about something called the Palace of Tears and just that name struck me as like
that's very point and it was the area where people basically could if they were approved by the east they could visit family from the west and of course it's got its nickname because that was the final goodbye for so many Germans and that just that was incredibly powerful.
No, I haven't.
You seem like you like that era.
It's just about how they tried to clone Hitler.
And there's all these boys in Brazil that look the same because the Gregory Peck's character was cloning.
Hitler and Lawrence Olivier's character was tracking the Nazis.
So it's something you might...
He's an Algoma kid done good.
Are you from the streets of Algoma?
The streets of downtown.
Yeah, the slums.
The slums of Algoma.
Are there slums in Algoma?
No, there's no.
It's a very nice city.
Too gorgeous of a town.
Do you have a place you like to write, Brett?
Do you have a... I ask a lot of writers this, because where do you find you do the best work?
Is it in a home office?
Do you rent space?
Do you go to a library?
No, it's a nice comfortable chair in my living room
some headphones on and then just a mix of movie soundtracks that kind of like fit.
definitely, I have like soundtracks to every book I write and then like, it just kind of helps, you know, if I'm in an action scene, maybe some Hans Zimmer, if it's
romantic, some James Horner, you know, like just, that definitely kind of
definitely.
But then you have to worry that, okay, the reader's not gonna be listening to the song, does it still work on its own?
What
still work a full-time day-to-day job, so my day starts early.
then I work, so I'm probably right from $3.30 to $8.00 is when I focus
books.
I do in the morning.
I work for, I'm a pricing specialist for a label manufacturing company.
So you write from $3.30 to $8.30.
That's a long time.
Yeah, like a lot of writers I know they cap it at three hours some pull a caraway and do Crazy two days in a row.
I can never do that.
Do you drink when you write?
I don't know a lot of people I know
I think they do great work when they drink, and maybe they do, but I know it was the writer Paul Schrader said, right drunk at its sober.
So at some point, you have to not drink.
They work for Hemingway.
Yeah, exactly.
Well, there's a lot of writers, I think, that capitalized on that, but it probably did affect them at some point.
What kind of books do you have?
Oh, God, we're out of time already.
Not totally, but we have to do a short bridge.
Yeah.
All right.
We're going to come back with author Brett Kissinger and talk more about his book, Whispers Through the Wall and the writing process.
And we'll do that and he'll help us close down the show here at Nightlight on a Tuesday.
We're coming right back.
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But I will be live from Madison and celebrity chef Chad Visker will be with me tomorrow.
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That's what they're called.
And we've got one of the Mad Moms will be on the show tomorrow.
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And then Lauren Holly will be joining me tomorrow to discuss the screening as well.
It'll be good to catch up with Lauren.
We haven't spoken quite a while, so anxious to catch up with her.
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Also Brett's book sounds powerful.
I have no doubt that it is.
That is our friend, Terry Barr, and she does a lot of great stuff here at Civic Media.
And she's referring to my guest, Brett Kissinger, who is here with me in the studio.
We were talking about the writing process.
Do you have a favorite author or one you try to emulate, but not too much?
I would say no.
I mean, obviously, growing up in the 90s, JK Rowling was a huge influence, and I don't write.
fantasy but um no i mean i i just no not really no
uh no not normally because i don't
want to be comparative and I don't want to, like you said, kind of emulate unintentionally.
So I try to steer clear of it.
Yeah.
Honestly, like the biggest influences for me growing up, I kind of hit that golden age of historical dramas with Titanic, Boris Gump, Saving Private Ryan, Gladiator, Braveheart, Apollo 13, you know, it's just kind of like the golden age of that.
So those are very impressionable on me.
So
Right now, I'm doing a book a year, which I'm pretty happy
great.
Yeah, I'm definitely a goal-oriented person.
So if I set off, I try not to take any days off and try to, you know, pretty strict with regimen.
Right.
I know I can get more done on a Saturday and Sunday than I can on a Monday, but if I can get 10 pages done on a Monday, that's
editing?
I try to get the first draft done, because I think that's the biggest hurdle for any writer
just get to the end.
So I finished the draft and then the first edit I kind of like to think I'm using a chainsaw You know and then as you progress and kind of improve it and then it's kind of like all right Let's get the scalpel out and now we're like where can I replace the word with a better word choice?
Yeah, I you know one of the things I like about we may have talked about this before but writing movies You have little benchmarks.
You have to hit right, you know You need a major plot point by somewhere between pages 20 and 30 your second act ends at page 75.
It's a comedy or 90
I like that.
I don't know that I could sit down and write a book where you just, you don't have any of that to follow or are there?
There are.
Yeah.
You definitely have those two where, you know, you need that catalyst.
You know, I like to think of it.
I'm kind of like with you in the screenplay where it's like, I need a catalyst.
Like something's got to hook the reader in the first 10, 15 pages.
Then there's got to be a big event.
and there's gotta be a crisis and a pinch and there's gotta be a showdown and a resolution.
So no, there are those points where every so often you need to hit and you've got, I was gonna say, you've got the heart of the story and then you've got kind of the muscle and the action and stuff, but like, yeah,
That's really cool.
It's funny because now that you say that, that is like every book.
I realized at some point that watching TV,
Hurt me as a reader and especially phones because my attention span is nothing anymore So when I'm reading a book and it's like this great event happens or it's a thrilling part and then they go back to you know Stephen had paid attention to every brick he laid in his garden there was vine and Ivy I'm like I can't read this anymore get to the action again.
You know, how do I fix that Brett?
What do I do?
Yeah, it's it's a fine blend where you know You want to give it an idea of what the daily life of character is but to your point where it's like I don't need eight paragraphs of how he takes right coffee
cup of coffee with cream Yeah, you have to you know You kind of use it where when it's action you kind of use quicker sentences and kind of knowing when to speed things up and slow things down and it's
Yeah, I just finished death by lightning, which is the Netflix series about James Garfield's assassination That was pretty incredible by all accounts.
He would have been a really phenomenal president and he was killed I think three months into his term Really well acted it's with Michael Shannon and Nick Offerman who's kind of
You know breaking out of that Parks and Rec.
Ron Swanson.
still the scenes as Chester Arthur the vice president I finished Ken Burns the American Revolution that was Ken Burns, you know, it's really really
in Brett Kissinger, B-R-E-T.
I will start starting tomorrow.
What do you like, 180 Conrad, 200, two bills?
He could bench you.
180 for sure.
He could bench both of us.
That would just be awkward, though.
All right.
Lauren Holly, folks.
Tomorrow night, live from Madison.
Thank you for all your texts and calls.
Thank you to Brett Kissinger.
Thank you to Jim Gnipfel.
And who else do we have?
Conrad Mr. Bill Leff helping us celebrate anniversary number two.
And Mike Siegel, we're coming back tomorrow night.
Good night, Wisconsin.
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